Thank you very much for your kind reply. I am sorry that during the summer vacation I cannot read and reply your email in time.
As stated in my first letter, my desired entrance date is in Fall of 2000. And I would like to provide my test scores. My TOEFL test score is 647 (Oct. 1997) with a TWE score of 5.0. My GRE test score is 2340 (Oct. 1996, V770 M800 A770). My GRE Subject score is 920 (Oct. 1998, Physics). And I will take the TSE test in the coming August. And my undergraduate and graduate GPA are both about 3.5 in 4.0, about top 10%-20% in my class.
I wish to make a note that during my undergraduate study I was quite young, and during my graduate study I take many efforts to study the basic courses in Physics by myself, which may be the reason my GPAs are not in the top 5%. But now I believe that I have been quite familiar in the knowledges of Physics, both the courses and the researches. So I hope that my test scores and grades are acceptable to Priceton with financial supports.
As to the research, I am very glad to learn the research background you provided in your letter. I am quite familiar with the works of X. Blase published in PRL and APL. I also know that J-C Charlier is a famous specialist in this field. So perhaps I could do theoretical research works in your group. Also, I am very glad to know that you have the needed main instruments for carbon nanotubes in your group, so that both theoretical and experimental works can be done.
I am puzzled at the “MRS meeting in Boston” you mentioned in your letter. What is the full-name of MRS? Is it a meeting specialized in nano-systems? I do research works on carbon nanotubes almost totally by myself, and perhaps are not familiar with such fixed terms. Would you please explain the contents of this meeting? Thanks. And you mentioned that your latest publications will come out in next months in PRL. Would you please send me the page number of this paper in PRL, and if possible, the full text of this paper? The journal PRL reaches to China very late, usually several months to half a year after published, and I don't have the account to find the full-texts of PRL on-line.
I am looking forward to receiving your warmhearted reply.
In the snowy season, the new students ushered in the annual independentenrollment. This will also be the first major turning point in my life journey.I come from high school, my name is , male, years old. Today, I solemnlyrecommend myself to your school, because entering is my dream, and I aspire tobe a student of and become a real person.
The yearning for has been around for a long time. From the day when Ientered high school, I began to have a gradual understanding of . Theuniversity has been mentioned by classmates and teachers more than once, andstudents have always regarded entering as a kind of honor and pride. I began topay attention to and understand bit by bit.
University isthe first university. Its predecessor isUniversity. It wasfounded on yearmonthday. It has gone through a glorious course of years. Ithas always followed the school motto of “seeking truth from facts” andconstituted “rigorous scholarship”. The excellent school spirit of “strictteaching requirements” is the profound foundation accumulated over the pastcentury, which brings endless driving force and encourages every student to makegreat efforts to govern and start a business for the country.
With the deepening of understanding of , my feelings for are increasingday by day. Every time is mentioned, I feel that kind of kindness. Yes, I seemto have an inexplicable relationship, and I silently consider the entrance toas my own Goal. Although is so far away, so high and unattainable, but I haveto work hard, I have to pursue my dreams, and I have to realize my beautifuldreams. With the continuous improvement of myself and the steady improvement ofacademic performance, I began to approach step by step. I understand that itis my dream that supports me to study harder and supports me to strive forentry.
I was born in an ordinary worker's family. Both my parents entered the cityafter entering a secondary school from the countryside. They have always had aperfect expectation of me, that is, going to a prestigious school and fulfillingtheir unfulfilled wishes. From elementary school to high school, my parents havenever imposed too strict requirements on my study. They pay more attention tothe cultivation of my personality, and pay more attention to my healthy andhappy study and life. They don’t expect me to be a nerd who reads hard and hard.They want me to grow into a sunny and joyous person, a kind, upright, andgrateful person. It is this family environment that gives me enough space toexpress my personality. I am happy, I am sunny, and I am strong. Although I amonly seventeen years old, I have grown to 1.82 meters. I have become the prideof my parents.
During my ten-year study career, I have grown up little by little andmatured step by step. I will not miss any opportunity to express myself. Iparticipate in various activities organized by the school. I will participate inspeech contests, sports competitions, etc. in front of. I care about the classand the organization. I have been a class leader from elementary school tojunior high school. After high school, we started running for the Student Union.I was the first to sign up for the election of the Minister of Sports. Afterhard work, I finally became a student of the Student Union. Minister, every weekI will participate in the school week to help teachers manage students. Thestudent union and weekly experience over the past three years have exercised myorganizational skills and language skills, and also tempered my will.
It is said that being a student union cadre will affect learning. I don'tfeel that way. It is the work of the student union that promotes my study. Thestudent union cadre must not lag behind others in learning. From entering highschool to 50 students, I have improved my ranking year by year. What I am mostproud of is that I have refreshed my highest ranking and score with the mostcertificates. At this moment, I have entered the first echelon, and I have notfallen behind in any subject. Phenomenon, the results of each subject develop ina balanced way, but my favorite is physics and chemistry, and I have achievednearly full marks many times, which has increased my confidence and motivationin studying.
I understand that I still have a necessary distance from at this moment,but I will use the remaining nearly 180 days to complete my studies, work hardto improve myself, and accumulate strength for my self-entry. I likeengineering, I like hands-on, and I have strong hands-on skills. I think theprofession of is also very suitable for me. If I can enter , I must work hardto learn professional skills and increase my talents. I also want to be likethose seniors of Like us, we designed more “Bird's Nest” and “Water Cube”, andresearched out many firsts after the first aircraft engine, so as to bring gloryto people.
Yours sincerely,
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Dear _,
In the snowy season, the new students ushered in the annual independent enrollment. This will also be the first major turning point in my life journey. I come from _ high school, my name is _, male, _ years old. Today, I solemnly recommend myself to your school, because entering _ is my dream, and I aspire to be a student of _ and become a real _ person.
The yearning for _ has been around for a long time. From the day when I entered high school, I began to have a gradual understanding of _. The university has been mentioned by classmates and teachers more than once, and students have always regarded entering_ as a kind of honor and pride. I began to pay attention to _ and understand _ bit by bit.
_University is_the first university. Its predecessor is_University. It was founded on _year_month_day. It has gone through a glorious course of _years. It has always followed the school motto of “seeking truth from facts” and constituted “rigorous scholarship”. The excellent school spirit of “strict teaching requirements” is the profound foundation accumulated over the past century, which brings endless driving force and encourages every student to make great efforts to govern and start a business for the country.
With the deepening of understanding of _, my feelings for _ are increasing day by day. Every time _ is mentioned, I feel that kind of kindness. Yes, I seem to have an inexplicable relationship, and I silently consider the entrance to_ as my own Goal. Although _ is so far away, so high and unattainable, but I have to work hard, I have to pursue my dreams, and I have to realize my beautiful dreams. With the continuous improvement of myself and the steady improvement of academic performance, I began to approach _ step by step. I understand that it is my dream that supports me to study harder and supports me to strive for entry.
I was born in an ordinary worker's family. Both my parents entered the city after entering a secondary school from the countryside. They have always had a perfect expectation of me, that is, going to a prestigious school and fulfilling their unfulfilled wishes. From elementary school to high school, my parents have never imposed too strict requirements on my study. They pay more attention to the cultivation of my personality, and pay more attention to my healthy and happy study and life. They don’t expect me to be a nerd who reads hard and hard. They want me to grow into a sunny and joyous person, a kind, upright, and grateful person. It is this family environment that gives me enough space to express my personality. I am happy, I am sunny, and I am strong. Although I am only seventeen years old, I have grown to 1.82 meters. I have become the pride of my parents.
During my ten-year study career, I have grown up little by little and matured step by step. I will not miss any opportunity to express myself. I participate in various activities organized by the school. I will participate in speech contests, sports competitions, etc. in front of. I care about the class and the organization. I have been a class leader from elementary school to junior high school. After high school, we started running for the Student Union. I was the first to sign up for the election of the Minister of Sports. After hard work, I finally became a student of the Student Union. Minister, every week I will participate in the school week to help teachers manage students. The student union and weekly experience over the past three years have exercised my organizational skills and language skills, and also tempered my will.
It is said that being a student union cadre will affect learning. I don't feel that way. It is the work of the student union that promotes my study. The student union cadre must not lag behind others in learning. From entering high school to 50 students, I have improved my ranking year by year. What I am most proud of is that I have refreshed my highest ranking and score with the most certificates. At this moment, I have entered the first echelon, and I have not fallen behind in any subject. Phenomenon, the results of each subject develop in a balanced way, but my favorite is physics and chemistry, and I have achieved nearly full marks many times, which has increased my confidence and motivation in studying.
I understand that I still have a necessary distance from _ at this moment, but I will use the remaining nearly 180 days to complete my studies, work hard to improve myself, and accumulate strength for my self-entry. I like engineering, I like hands-on, and I have strong hands-on skills. I think the profession of _ is also very suitable for me. If I can enter _, I must work hard to learn professional skills and increase my talents. I also want to be like those seniors of _ Like us, we designed more “Bird's Nest” and “Water Cube”, and researched out many firsts after the first aircraft engine, so as to bring glory to people.
My name is xxxxxx, and I am a student of xxxxxxMiddle Schoolxxxxxx. I and I haveread “Moonlight in the Lotus Pond” when I was young. The vast moonlight quietlyfalls down, and the lotus leaf pavilion in the field is standing, and thebeautiful scenery like a dream has left a deep impression on me. From then on,the simple, elegant and rich cultural heritage took root in my heart and becamea sacred place for my dreams.
xxI value all-round development of talents, so in my daily study of varioussubjects, I have been steadily playing and performing well, and I have beenamong the best in all previous examinations.
In terms of competition: won the first prize of Shaanxi Division in thexxxxth National Biology Olympiad for Middle School Students in 20xxxx andrepresented Shaanxi in the national finals and won the silver medal. In the 20xxxxNational League, won the first prize of Shaanxi Division in Mathematics andChemistry second prize. Here I want to talk about the experience ofparticipating in the national biology competition during the summer vacation.When I came to Wuhan No. 2 Middle School, with my smile and affinity, I metfriends from all over the country, chatted with each other, and shared ideals; Iunderstood the outer building of Qingshanlou outside the mountain. Compared withthe elites in the country, I still have a lot of places. I need to improve; Ihave learned that even if I encounter setbacks, I never give up. It is moreimportant to adjust my mentality to meet the next challenge... All of these areprecious experiences that I will never forget in my life, and they have alsogiven me a deeper understandingxx“ The school motto of ”Keep on striving forself“
I have a wide range of hobbies: Although I am a science student, I am veryinterested in history and humanities knowledge. In my spare time, I like towatch the ”Hundreds of Forums“ and watch the Chinese learning knowledge conteston TV, and I intend to improve my comprehensive literacy. I used to studyChinese painting when I was a child. I like to write letters and ink on my life.I like the distant and transcendence of ”landscape drags thousands of milesaway“; I also learned the guzheng, and I like to pick and pick on the twenty-onestringed piano. I like ”High Mountain and Flowing Water“ to meet and hate late,like ”Chunjiang Huayueye“ graceful sadness; in junior high school, I went tolearn taekwondo, I like to listen to the crisp sound of kicking the target withmy legs breaking through the air. Taekwondo spirit-courtesy, justice and shame,patience and self-denial, unyielding-is firmly engraved in the heart andpracticed.
My ideal: I have liked seeing all kinds of buildings since I was young. Thefirst light of every solar day in the Temple of Abu Simbel, the towering spiresof Notre Dame Cathedral, and the sails of the Sydney Opera House all make meDeeply fascinated. I hope to become a member of the Department of Architectureand form my own unique architectural style, so as to realize my ultimatedream-to participate in the design of the China Pavilion at the future WorldExpo, and let the world see the elegance of China!
I like Tagore's poem: ”The sky does not leave traces of birds, but I haveflown.“ For my dream-xx, I have accumulated strength for many years, waiting forthe moment of thin hair. No matter what the result is, at least I have workedhard for my dream and for my life, then I will never regret it. Perhaps when Ithink of the experience of this period when I am pale and gray, I will alsosmile for my persistence at the beginning and the determination to break theboat when I was young.
”There will be times when the winds and waves break, and the sails will behung up on the clouds to help the sea.“ xx Yuan, wait for me!
Yours sincerely,
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Dear _,
Think about the decisions you have made that led to your current position. Past: What choices have you made that led to your current position present: why is astern mba necessary at this point in your life? future: what is your desired position upon graduation from the Stern school I have always desired a career that requires innovation, educated risk, and foresight. I learned to respect these qualities from my father, a Lebanese immigrant who worked for years to create his own business. Through his example, I have seen firsthand the advantages and challenges of self-employment--the rewards to be gained and the total commitment required. My goal is to create a business based on my own ideas and efforts, and have made decisions aimed at bringing this dream into fruition .After graduating from college, I accepted a position as the manager of an established German restaurant in San Francisco. I had been the evening manager there for nearly two years while attending college, and knew that the restaurant was struggling. For several years, high overhead costs and poor marketing had brought revenue to a minimum. I saw the position as an intriguing challenge; I knew I could dramatically increase the restaurant’ s profitability. Immediately after accepting the position in July of 1995,I addressed the most significant problem: high overhead from over staffing, food waste, and unnecessary purchases of supplies. I lowered each of these expenses while maintaining the restaurant’ s quality and efficiency. My next target was marketing. Inexpensive advertisement in local newspapers, attractive signage, and Internet postings brought in many new customers. In the meantime, I took control of the accounting, eliminating the need for independent help. The increased revenue and decreased spending had an immediate effect. At the end of 1996, the restaurant reported a profit for the first time in six years. I remained with the business until it was sold in 1997, monitoring these changes in order to provide lasting improvement. Although the position made me realize that the restaurant business did not appeal to me, those two years reaffirmed my desire to operate my own business. I had not abandoned my education during that time; while working at the restaurant, I had taken real estate courses in the evening and passed the California State Broker exam in _. My brother and I launched our own property management company in April of 1996,and it quickly grew. We currently have seven commercial properties under management. Our responsibilities include leasing, accounting, and property maintenance. In 1997, I began working as a broker with a commercial real estate company, largely to gain the knowledge of retail to improve the leasing and sales division of my company. I am currently employed in a sales position with a private business bank in San Francisco.
I was hired to bring business into the bank, which rarely advertises, prefer ring to attract business primarily from referrals. My responsibilities include interacting with potential clients, selling loans and deposits, and account maintenance. This job has given me better understanding of sales and finance, which is crucial to the success of any business. Although my ultimate goal is to grow our property management company into a full time business, these positions in other industries have been invaluable learning aids. Property management requires an extensive knowledge of real estate, banking, accounting and sales. I now feel confident that I have gained valuable experience with my work.
However, I know that earning a graduate degree will further enhance the skills I need to develop a viable company. The Leonard N. Stern School of Business at New York University will allow me to learn from the finest teachers, interact with the brightest students, and experience one of the top graduate programs in the United States. I can only anticipate the invaluable knowledge and training I will gain from being a part of this program.
Although my work experience has been extremely important, the NYU Stern School of Business will be equally as educational. It will allow me to incorporate my experiences with other equally ambitious students, and to broaden my goals, ideas and perspectives. A graduate degree in Management and Organizational Behavior is a significant asset to any business owner. The first year curriculum of accounting, management, finance, marketing, and economics will enhance my knowledge of the basic foundations of business and management. During my second semester, I will enroll in the track courses of Entrepreneurial Studies. These classes will teach me advanced business techniques and their successful implementation. In addition, Stern-sponsored, non-academic entrepreneurial organizations will be both educational and enjoyable. I view these as an opportunity to meet students who share similar goals. They will expand my awareness of new business concepts within our quickly evolving economy--which I hope to incorporate into my own company. The experiences available at NYU are myriad, and a degree from the Stern School will propel me toward the realization of my professional goals.
My name is ___, and I am a student of ___Middle School___. I and I have read ”Moonlight in the Lotus Pond“ when I was young. The vast moonlight quietly falls down, and the lotus leaf pavilion in the field is standing, and the beautiful scenery like a dream has left a deep impression on me. From then on, the simple, elegant and rich cultural heritage took root in my heart and became a sacred place for my dreams.
_I value all-round development of talents, so in my daily study of various subjects, I have been steadily playing and performing well, and I have been among the best in all previous examinations.
In terms of competition: won the first prize of Shaanxi Division in the __th National Biology Olympiad for Middle School Students in 20__ and represented Shaanxi in the national finals and won the silver medal. In the 20__ National League, won the first prize of Shaanxi Division in Mathematics and Chemistry second prize. Here I want to talk about the experience of participating in the national biology competition during the summer vacation. When I came to Wuhan No. 2 Middle School, with my smile and affinity, I met friends from all over the country, chatted with each other, and shared ideals; I understood the outer building of Qingshanlou outside the mountain. Compared with the elites in the country, I still have a lot of places. I need to improve; I have learned that even if I encounter setbacks, I never give up. It is more important to adjust my mentality to meet the next challenge... All of these are precious experiences that I will never forget in my life, and they have also given me a deeper understanding_” The school motto of “Keep on striving for self”
I have a wide range of hobbies: Although I am a science student, I am very interested in history and humanities knowledge. In my spare time, I like to watch the “Hundreds of Forums” and watch the Chinese learning knowledge contest on TV, and I intend to improve my comprehensive literacy. I used to study Chinese painting when I was a child. I like to write letters and ink on my life. I like the distant and transcendence of “landscape drags thousands of miles away”; I also learned the guzheng, and I like to pick and pick on the twenty-one stringed piano. I like “High Mountain and Flowing Water” to meet and hate late, like “Chunjiang Huayueye” graceful sadness; in junior high school, I went to learn taekwondo, I like to listen to the crisp sound of kicking the target with my legs breaking through the air. Taekwondo spirit-courtesy, justice and shame, patience and self-denial, unyielding-is firmly engraved in the heart and practiced.
My ideal: I have liked seeing all kinds of buildings since I was young. The first light of every solar day in the Temple of Abu Simbel, the towering spires of Notre Dame Cathedral, and the sails of the Sydney Opera House all make me Deeply fascinated. I hope to become a member of the Department of Architecture and form my own unique architectural style, so as to realize my ultimate dream-to participate in the design of the China Pavilion at the future World Expo, and let the world see the elegance of China!
I like Tagore's poem: “The sky does not leave traces of birds, but I have flown.” For my dream-_, I have accumulated strength for many years, waiting for the moment of thin hair. No matter what the result is, at least I have worked hard for my dream and for my life, then I will never regret it. Perhaps when I think of the experience of this period when I am pale and gray, I will also smile for my persistence at the beginning and the determination to break the boat when I was young.
“There will be times when the winds and waves break, and the sails will be hung up on the clouds to help the sea.” _ Yuan, wait for me!
Having a flair for Economics and accounting I have decided that I want a degree in Accounting and Finance or Management. The many brilliant representatives of the management community around the world have strengthened that resolve.
When I worked in my school as a tutor of English as a Second Language for students from a community school in Muscat, I realized the importance of a strong leader who could organize, command respect, and be able to work well with others. These ideas were further enforced by my month long internship at Novartis Pharmaceutical (Accounts and Finance Department and Human Resources Department).
I attended the Harvard Model Congress in Paris and won the Award of Distinction. One skill in particular that contributed to this award was my confident public speaking.
The last 4 months have been crucial in my learning of real world business and economics. For my IB Extended Essay, titled “To What Extent Does Subway in Oman Operate as an Oligopoly”, I set out to prove the oligpolistic structure of the fast food market in Oman. In this effort, I have come across many real life complexities in pricing behaviour, profit making and other aspects of the Theory of the Firm. While attempting to explain these alternate theories of firms I have developed a keen interest in analyzing and understanding how the world of business works.
After an undergraduate degree in accounting and finance or management I plan to go onto post graduate studies and work on an MBA. A strong performance in a BA will allow me to move onto an MBA and only then shall I be satisfied.
For the last four years I have been part of our schools volleyball team ICE. We have retained our ISAC (Inter Schools Activities Conference, Middle East) title for four years. Playing in the power hitters (spiker) position requires immense physical fitness and to accomplish that I regularly go to the gym for fitness training. I am also part of my school track and field team. Being the fastest sprinter in the school since 11th grade the 100m, 200m and 400m races are my specialty even though I still pursue long distance running. In my spare time I explore and master the computer as I am conversant with a Visual Basic Programming course. It is imperative for me to have the latest hardware and software and I make it a point to install everything myself. I also learn Urdu as it is my native tongue and a link to my culture, to maintain that is crucial.
Living in a diverse international community of over 52 nationalities has allowed to me recognize and appreciate different cultures. With the experience I have and the strong motivation to craft a bright future I feel I can justify my decision to pursue a career in Accounting and Finance or Management.
“Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one” Stella Adler.
Where the line of normalcy is shaped differently in the eyes of artists, as everything is relative, there exists the freedom that only artists can create – the space, colour and texture on which that line of normalcy lies, in order to make it one at all.
To extent my egomania is an honest tool of my style, it is in need of elaboration and solidifying within the disciplines and professionalisms in studying art at college.
As an AS Psychology student, I learnt that the perception of stress is relative “ where I find the paranoia of my reality stressful, it is much of my escape that I share with many others to spend time doing Art & Design (currently at A2) in free-periods and after school to produce more research, drawings, developed experiments and final pieces, from my C at GCSE to an A for AS. I am also predicted an A for A2. This drive came from a particular experience, which I'd rather not speak of.
More relevantly, I am experienced in etching and print-press, collagraph, photography, life sketches, multi-media and Photoshop. I have used a range of materials in previous artworks: works on canvas, and acrylic, installations, multi-media works and film editing, of which I am able to use iMovie and Cyberlink Power Director and have competent use of, as I take a personal interest in film-making.
I have also voluntarily produced and edited advertisement films for 2 competing business studies classes where I was able to help creatively and equally, providing that it was their own equipment and concept.
In studying English (Lit./Lang.) the analytical aspects have helped aquired the appropriate information behind concept. As an aspiring poet, I have contributed poems of my own to the school’s English Literature Magazine (of students works) and have written for the 6th Form monthly Newsletter, ‘Rant N Rave, for which I have written poetry and articles. I have also dispersed these creative energies in Music Technology. At the Dubai 92.0 FM Radio Station, I was able to take a glimpse into the radio industry, as well as accompany the radio-jockey ‘Catboy’ on air. As there were 2 other students, we organized play lists; part of the job was to understand the business aspect of airtime. In May 07, I was given the opportunity to work-shadow a General Planning Manager, involving the planning of layouts and structures of building shopping malls for Majid Al Futtaim, Dubai. This helped me realize the importance of relation between physical demands of construction and planning.
I have obtained certificates and commendation letters, project certificates, best advertisement for Shakespeare’s 12 Night Play (playing one of the main characters roles as 'Maria'), intermediate snowboarding, skiing, and have achieved the Duke of Edinburgh Bronze.
As I have lived in and travelled countries from Malaysia to Switzerland, France to Saudi Arabia, I have more cause to find a universal message that not only makes us appreciate diversity, but unifies us as human beings. From a Marxist perspective, I deliberately refuse to accept the pyramid of our society. This is simply one constant idea and philosophy that even disturbs my sleep.
Fully aware of the competition that goes on in the media industry, with my competitive and somewhat cynical characteristic; I am able to critically self-evaluate which forces me to better myself constantly improving my skills and techniques, adhering to the business aspects as well. Taking first year studies or foundation art would help me explore more skill which I am capable in a more professional and disciplined manner as well as improve specified research work.
My aspirations are based on my persistency, enabling me to work adaptively in the art business. I may work towards the Visual Communication, Painting, Intermedia art or Illustration, not sufficed to say the least, and followed entry into Second Year Studies to define my Specialism.
I am a senior high school student in _province_city_middle school. Thank you for reviewing my application for studying abroad. Because of the longing and respect for your school, I decided to apply to study in your school this year.
I am cheerful and sincere. In my three years of high school study and life, I have gradually grown from the immature and ignorant boy to a boy who loves life, is positive, optimistic, firm, caring, responsible and enterprising. . Facing all kinds of problems in study and life, I have my own unique insights and mature ways of thinking. Facing all kinds of difficulties and setbacks I have encountered, I have my own appropriate methods and strong adjustment ability. Students with sound personality, positive thinking, and excellent character. Therefore, I think I am fully qualified to participate in your school’s independent enrollment selection and have the ability to become a member of your school.
Since the first grade of elementary school, I have served as the monitor of the class. In my second year of high school, I participated in the election for the student union of the school. After 20_ student representatives voted, I was elected as the vice chairman of the student union of the school. I am responsible for my work certification and have been unanimously affirmed by my teachers and classmates. I have been awarded as outstanding student leader and outstanding member of the school year at the school level for many consecutive times, and have been awarded the honorary title of “Outstanding Student Leader of Lanzhou City”. During the one-year tenure of the Vice-Chairman of the Student Union, he successfully organized and held a number of campus activities including campus debate competitions, which not only enriched the campus life of the students, but also enabled more exercise and exertion of their own abilities. space.
I have a wide range of hobbies. I have been learning piano since the age of five and have obtained the sixth certificate. I have a soft spot for music. Listening to the melody flowing from my fingertips, I seem to touch the joys and sorrows in life that cannot be forgotten; With the lingering notes in my ears, I seemed to touch the tranquility and freshness of life that belonged to me alone; singing the tunes that circled my heart, I seemed to touch the softest touch of sunshine in life. What makes me intoxicated is not only music, but also writing. As long as I have time, I will always write down some magnificent or soft words, or melt them into a poem and essay that records my growth path. I have also won city essays many times because of my love and dedication to writing. The first prize of the competition. I think I should be grateful to my parents and God for giving me such a talent and cultivating me with such a specialty, so that I will not be so melancholy and hesitating in my future life.
I am not a person who is accustomed to procrastination. I treat my own learning and can continue to move forward. Even when faced with difficulties, I will not shrink back. The greater the difficulties will stimulate my greater potential. In the three years of high school study and life, I have participated in a number of subject competition examinations, and won the second prize of the National Chinese Proficiency Competition and other excellent results. At the same time, I have strong self-study ability. In the tense study life of the third year of high school, I can still complete the established review plan with high quality and ensure a good work and rest time. This is closely related to my efficient learning method and my own learning method. Indivisible.
I am devoted to the applied psychology major of your school. Psychology has broad prospects for development in this century. I urge you to accept my application. I believe I will definitely let your choice reflect its value. I also hope that my application will make your review work more rewarding today.
For the past three years, my undergraduate education has exposed me to thevarious sub-fields of Computer Science (CS). However, our syllabus has focusedmainly on “traditional” CS topics, such as Operating systems and single-CPUsystems. We have had barely a glimpse of the newer technologies that are likelyto change the way computing is done in not-so-distant future. The desire toexamine such subjects in greater detail is what has prompted me to opt forgraduate study.
Most of my interests are in the fields related to information systems andsharing of computing power and resources. I am interested in Database managementsystems. We have had a course on this topic in our undergraduate program and Iwould like to explore it greater detail. Another subject that I would like tostudy further is that of Distributed Operating systems, a topic which we studiedbriefly under the course on Operating systems. Networking is the third field Iconsider interesting enough to study in greater depth. We have not yet had acourse on this subject but I have a fair amount of knowledge through independentreading.
I have tried, throughout my undergraduate career, not to restrict myactivities to those imposed by the syllabus. I have been a member of theorganizing team of my college’s annual intercollegiate technical festival. Ihave participated in an Internet Workshop conducted by Indian Institute ofTechnology, Mumbai, whose aim was to explain the underlying concepts used in theNet such as routing, domain naming, protocols & also to give an overview ofInternet related languages such as HTML, VRML, JavaScript and Java. I have alsoattended a seminar on E-commerce organized by Verifone India Ltd, an Indiansubsidiary of Hewlett-Packard. These seminars have given me “ extra” informationwhich was not possible through the undergraduate program.
In addition, I have participated in Software Developing Competition where Ihad developed ‘Graphical Sorting Tutor’ in C along with my co-developers. Thisproject sought to demonstrate and explain the various sorting techniquesgraphically. I am also developing an Intranet e-mail Client and Server in Javaas my final year project. This will be developed using SMTP & POP3 protocolswith minimal MIME conformance. These projects have exposed me to the industrystandards in software development along with the invaluable experience I gainedfrom them.
The fact that more than five of the faculty of your department are workingon subjects that I would like to pursue further, especially information systems,parallel computing, and distributed systems, and that your department isnationally ranked has in large part determined my decision to apply to youruniversity. I also believe that I possess the capacity for hard work & themotivation required to perform well in an undergraduate program as competitiveas yours. Since my economic resources permit me to partially fund myself for theduration of graduate course, I request you to consider me for any form offinancial aid such as teaching and research assistantships.
In conclusion, it is my belief that a higher degree in CS from an esteemeduniversity like yours will prepare me for the challenges of the rapidly evolvingcomputer industry.
Yours sincerely,
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篇12：丹麦研究生留学简单申请书
丹麦研究生留学简单申请书
Dear _,
For the past three years, my undergraduate education has exposed me to the various sub-fields of Computer Science (CS). However, our syllabus has focused mainly on “traditional” CS topics, such as Operating systems and single-CPU systems. We have had barely a glimpse of the newer technologies that are likely to change the way computing is done in not-so-distant future. The desire to examine such subjects in greater detail is what has prompted me to opt for graduate study.
Most of my interests are in the fields related to information systems and sharing of computing power and resources. I am interested in Database management systems. We have had a course on this topic in our undergraduate program and I would like to explore it greater detail. Another subject that I would like to study further is that of Distributed Operating systems, a topic which we studied briefly under the course on Operating systems. Networking is the third field I consider interesting enough to study in greater depth. We have not yet had a course on this subject but I have a fair amount of knowledge through independent reading.
I have tried, throughout my undergraduate career, not to restrict my activities to those imposed by the syllabus. I have been a member of the organizing team of my college’s annual intercollegiate technical festival. I have participated in an Internet Workshop conducted by Indian Institute of Technology, Mumbai, whose aim was to explain the underlying concepts used in the Net such as routing, domain naming, protocols & also to give an overview of Internet related languages such as HTML, VRML, JavaScript and Java. I have also attended a seminar on E-commerce organized by Verifone India Ltd, an Indian subsidiary of Hewlett-Packard. These seminars have given me “ extra” information which was not possible through the undergraduate program.
In addition, I have participated in Software Developing Competition where I had developed ‘Graphical Sorting Tutor’ in C along with my co-developers. This project sought to demonstrate and explain the various sorting techniques graphically. I am also developing an Intranet e-mail Client and Server in Java as my final year project. This will be developed using SMTP & POP3 protocols with minimal MIME conformance. These projects have exposed me to the industry standards in software development along with the invaluable experience I gained from them.
The fact that more than five of the faculty of your department are working on subjects that I would like to pursue further, especially information systems, parallel computing, and distributed systems, and that your department is nationally ranked has in large part determined my decision to apply to your university. I also believe that I possess the capacity for hard work & the motivation required to perform well in an undergraduate program as competitive as yours. Since my economic resources permit me to partially fund myself for the duration of graduate course, I request you to consider me for any form of financial aid such as teaching and research assistantships.
In conclusion, it is my belief that a higher degree in CS from an esteemed university like yours will prepare me for the challenges of the rapidly evolving computer industry.
An experienced engineer of security printing with China’s Central Bank, I now would like to scale higher intellectual heights by pursuing Ph. D. studies in mechanical engineering at your university. I believe that my strong background in CAD has adequately prepared me to embark on this endeavor.
I have been working since 1999 for the People’s Bank of China, a Chinese version of the Federal Reserve, at its unique research institute of security printing, with the responsibility of designing the Chinese currency and the machinery to produce it. By engaging me in a variety of projects, the job afforded me ample exposure to cutting-edge developments in computer technologies, particularly in CAD software. I have, for example, recently redeveloped a purchased CAD (Computer Aided Design) software to make it more suitable for our own purposes. By adding our own part/subassembly to the database and make our own drawing criteria, we have achieved dramatically better efficiency.
My job performance, which has won me professional respect from all of my colleagues, was achieved thanks to the strong background I acquired as a student in computer science. My undergraduate GPA ranked first among the 63 students of classmates in mechanical department, for which I was awarded first-class and second-class prizes many times. My graduate GPA ranked among the top 4% of the 105 students in my year, which won me the “San Hao” scholarship every year during the three years of my graduate studies.
Unlike many other Chinese students, who are content with performing well in exams, I made a point of learning through my own hands-on experiences. In the Master’s program at the Beijing Institute of Printing, I gained an in-depth understanding of artificial intelligence, including expert system and genetic algorithm, especially in neural network. For my thesis, I programmed a multi-level BP neural network with C language to analyze my mathematical model, and applied much of my knowledge in optimization. I thus became able to program with a host of different computer languages, especially C++, with which I helped my graduate advisor to design a paper-cutting machine. To analyze the mechanism statically and dynamically, I programmed a software system to analyze and emulate it on screen. In undergraduate studies, I had often programmed with Fortran77 and the Basic language.
Upon the completion of my Master’s studies, I easily passed the doctoral record examination in CAD/CAM of Beijing University, one f the top universities in China. But I gave up the opportunity in order to gain more practical experience in the industry. The decision proved to be right, as it guaranteed me better access to sophisticated facilities, such as state-of-the-art personal computers. With the People’s Bank of China, I have thus accumulated solid expertise in many kinds of operating and application software systems, particularly in CAD. I now have a firm grip on the latest developments in computer science in China.
The challenges I met and the successes I achieved at the People’s Bank have not only endowed me with confidence but also fired off my desire to further improve myself. I have enjoyed high-quality and efficient production with the use of a kind of PC-based CAD software, MDT, developed by Autodesk Corporation. I now have a dream: some day, every person can design his favorite product with some sort of CAD software, and then search for an ideal factory over high-speed internet its production; and the factory will put specifications of the product, as it has received them via the high-speed internet into its CIMS, and out pops the product, as designed, at the end of the factory’s production line. It is a beautiful dream for every engineer, but many difficulties the speed of data-transfer and how to manage the product data among CAD, CAM, CAPP and CAE systems. These questions are fascinating, and I would like to come up with my own answers to them.
To prepare myself for advanced studies in your country, I have persisted in improving my English proficiency. As demonstrated by my score of 700 (96%) in the verbal section of GRE, I now have an adequate command of English for undertaking graduate studies in your program.
After carefully comparing the strengths of many universities, I find Mercy University particularly suited for my purpose. It has got the best combination of quality faculty, many state-of-the-art facilities, and an intriguing academic environment. Currently, China still lags significantly behind Western countries in mechanical engineering. I hope that, with a few years of graduate studies under your seasoned guidance, I will be able to return to my motherland and help bring mechanical engineering in my country to international standards.
Although my ultimate objective is a Ph. D. degree, I am willing to do a Master’s degree if necessary. In either case, I would like to concentrate my studies in one or a combination of the following areas: CAD, CAM, CIMS, Computer graphics, Mechanical design, Mechanical manufacturing, Optimization, Artificial intelligence, and Robotics. Your favorable evaluation of my application will be highly appreciated.
